Ratman and the Planet That Watched Back part 2
- Robert Stephens

- Jan 25
- 2 min read
The crystal shard Ratman brought home wouldn’t stay quiet.
Back in his hideout, it pulsed brighter every night, casting shadows that moved on their own. The rats avoided it, staring with nervous little eyes like they knew something he didn’t. Then, without warning, the shard cracked open—spilling a beam of light that tore a hole in the air.
Ratman stepped through without hesitation.
This planet was… wrong.
The sky was a deep, bruised purple, and instead of stars, giant eyes floated above, slowly blinking. The ground was smooth like glass, but warm—almost like skin. Everywhere Ratman walked, the planet seemed to notice.
“Okay,” Ratman muttered. “Not creepy at all.”
Strange towers rose in the distance, bending slightly toward him as he moved. Alien rats—tall, thin, and shadowy—emerged from behind the structures. Their eyes glowed white, and when they spoke, it wasn’t with sound. It was with thoughts.
You walk between worlds, Rat King.
Ratman felt the pressure in his head but didn’t back down.
“Just visiting,” he thought back. “Not here to wreck the place.”
The sky-eyes narrowed.
A massive shape rose from the horizon—the Watcher, the living mind of the planet itself. Every step it took sent ripples through reality. It wasn’t angry… it was curious.
The Watcher reached into Ratman’s memories—his city, the alleys, the rats, the nights he protected people who never knew his name.
For a long moment, everything was silent.
Then the planet sighed.
You may travel. But you must carry our mark.
A symbol burned briefly into Ratman’s cloak—a shifting eye surrounded by claw marks. Power hummed through him, not dangerous, but aware.
When Ratman stepped back through the portal, the crystal shard was gone.
In its place was a map burned into the concrete floor—
dozens of strange symbols, each one a different weird planet calling his name.
Ratman smiled beneath his hood.
“Guess I’m not done yet.”
And far away, in the space between worlds…
something else noticed him too.

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